Hiring Manager Critique of My Letter

Brutal 30-second-read feedback before you send

The model reads your letter the way a busy hiring manager does — skimming — and tells you exactly where it loses attention and what to cut.

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Act as a hiring manager for this role with 40 applications to read today.

1. Skim my letter for 30 seconds and tell me what you actually retained.
2. Mark the exact sentence where you'd stop reading, and why.
3. Score /…

10 on: relevance to the JD, specificity, credibility, tone, length.
4. List every sentence to cut and every claim that needs evidence.
5. Give me one rewritten opening line that would have kept you reading.

JD: <PASTE>
My letter: <PASTE>

How to use it

1
Paste the JD and your draft
2
Cut everything flagged
3
Rewrite using the suggested opener
4
Re-run until it survives the skim

Example outputs

You

380-word letter for a PM role

Stopped at sentence 4, scores, 6 cuts, new opening line.

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